On this I did a first draft and when we reviewed over it it wasn’t that interesting. So when I did my second draft I decided to grip the reader and hopefully I did it. I also got bad reviews on the first one but on the second one I persevered and got really good scores. Persevering can be really helpful. It can make things much much better this is what I learned.
What I didn’t like was I did my first draft on the day we were supposed to turn it in. I wasn’t proud. The second one I did it fast and efficiently. Persevering is an very good strategy.