Writing SLC 2


Sorry, all the pages are muddled up but I think you can find them by the chapters.

I am very proud of this writing piece.i had never written a full fantasy story before and it felt really good finishing it. Through the journey if fantasy writing we learned about leads punctuation and how to get your audience hooked. I really like this story and I hope you enjoy reading it too.

What I am not proud if is that I finished this story in the last minute and I also got disrated and didn’t get much done in one day. From now on I will like to push myself harder so I can finish on the deadline.

Writing SLC/Reading

I am particularly proud of this page because before I came to this school I didn’t  jot whatsoever but when I came to this school I started to jot a lot!

I normally jot in class reading times but not so much in independent reading.

My goal is to jot more in independent reading. So I can be a better reader and keep track of information. This is what I put down for every writing survey which means that I am not jotting. I don’t like jotting when you are in a really good books.

My goal is to jot more in independent reading. Another reason is that I am proud is that I jotted on an independent reading book. I need to continue doing this every day.


Dear Mom and Dad,

     Thank you for attending this conference. I am very nervous and I have never done this sort of thing before. I will be talking about what I have done this year as a student of AES. Throught the year all of us have faced challenges but by the end of the year we hope that we all conquer the challenges. Thank you again for attending this conference.

     This past week we have been given fantasy stories we have written,continumms, reading surveys and reflections. On the continumm we took at the begging of the year and the one we did now had a very big difference! A continumm is a survey that we took which asks us about persevering and being in school socially. What helped me was that I got to now my friends a little bit more and I never been given more challenges in school. My problem is that I can start on a really good project and then when time is nearly up I rush too much and the project turns into a fail. I want  to not get distracted easily and work more efficiently.

Once I have achieved my goal I think I’ll be able to work more faster.

I hop to achieve my goal in the future and become the best person I can never

By Kai 

Tinker Time!

What: I got discluded from an activity and I wanted to build something myself. I built a giant cup tower and we did slo mo videos on us bashing through them.

So what: I realized that sometimes ideas can spark you at the times you least expect it. 

Now what: I want to build more kind of structures with cups. Like pyramids or 3D sharpes. Have great teamwork!!

Human rights essay: Everyone Has The Right To Food And Shelter

I Believe Everyone has The right to have Food and Shelter.By Kai lewis
     Did you know that the schools in L.A(one of the largest school systems) makes 650,000 meals a day. Students waste 100,000 dollars worth of that food!! People waste too much food nowadays. Some people get too much and throw it away some die without any food.

     All around the globe people are dying of starvation. Every 4 seconds a person dies of starvation. Sadly they are mostly children.

     Why should you be wasting so much food when you can’t get enough of it. Food is one of our primary needs. Everybody should have some.

     We also need shelter. Nobody should be freezing or boiling because they have no home.

3.1 million people are homeless and I feel really sorry for the people who live on the streets.

     We all need these 2 things.
     On May 12th and April 25th a deadly earthquake happened in Nepal. 8,857 people died and 21,952 people got injured. When this happened people all around the world wanted to help and when I heard that people were getting rescued I realised that people believed In everyone should deserve food and shelter and so did my school.

     It was a Monday and the headmaster announced that we were going to do a fundraiser for the week for the people in Nepal. For the week we made yeti cupcakes, raffle tickets for a cuddly yeti toy, we made prayer flags to hang around the school and we did a name the yeti competition which is a competition when we try to get the best name for the toy yeti. . We felt like we helped a lot of people while we were having fun.

     We all believed everyone should have the right to food and shelter. In total we raised £300.00 which is $455.00!!
     Another thing which makes me really angry is how rich people use money. You may know celebrities like Justin Bieber, Kim Kardashian and so forth. I have read articles on them which are ridiculous. For example one said ‘ Justin Bieber throws away his pants after he wears them’.

     I personally think that this is just being greedy. Pants can be really expensive and he just throws them away. I think that the money the pants are worth should be donated to people don’t have have any food. One more article said ‘Miley Cyrus changes wallpaper of a hotel because she didn’t like the colour’ this I think is just a waste of money. Just because she didn’t like the wallpaper doesn’t mean she has to waste money for it. People are dying from all over the world because they’re hungry and can’t afford to buy anything.
      In conclusion I think money shouldn’t be wasted for careless things. I think we can all help each other in life and everyone should have food and shelter. This is for me one of the most important human rights. I hope you use your money wisely as well.